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    you are timeless…
    adrift on your own ocean
    sometimes near
    strangely afar

    i still call for you everyday
    every night

    here in the shallow dawn
    we can disappear forever
    floating on your wave
    sailing…

    lost like children on a
    disappearing sea

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    PoetsofBlood commented on Untitled

    09-12-2009

    This really good, the poem gave me images not even like what ya wrote, cool..
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    rimbaud

    09/13/2009

    Thanks for the comment. Imagery is what poems are all about.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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