UntiTTled

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Hotep! Thanks 2 everyone who participated in what I luv. Poetry is my life and I appreciate those who took the time and listened 2 my thoughts and feelings. *Remember*  2 Be INTERESTING U have 2 first be INTERESTED.

UntiTTled

 

I Loved you, even before I knew I had you.

I wanted you, even before I knew your name.

I desired you, even before I knew you existed.

I felt your hurt even before I Overstood pain.                                                                                               

Just to behold you, Brings back memories that were there before I actually beheld you.

Maybe it was in another time,

Another place,

Maybe even on another plane of existence.

How we came in contact:

Well that's Irrelavent.

In my mind we've been together,

Intimately been together.

And is planning to be together for the rest of our lives.

You see,

I'm determined to be a part of your life.

Just like it's inevitable that you are a part of mines.

Now I know that I may have doubted you at times,

And even gave my loyalty to despair.

But just to know that you are there,

With me no matter where.

Is reassuring enough to get me through my empty and sometimes lifeless stare.

See your like a beacon of light that guides me through the dark and gloomy storm.

Able to take on any shape and any form.

You resist,

When others conform.

Deep within the triple darkness where you were born.

I close my eyes and feel safe from all harm.

Now I'm positively sure I can't live without you,

Because you are one of a kind.

Because you see.

I  Loved you,

Even before you became a living thought inside my mind.

Haki "The HottestNewPoet" Natuwah

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ccslim commented on UntiTTled

10-28-2009

Nice write! As I read I felt the depth surpasses the affection of a human on to a spirtual level! This glides through great with minor flaws in presentaion.

HakiNatuwah1

12/04/2009

Thank you so much ccslim for your evaluation of my piece...but you failed to take a guess as to what you think that I was referring too...^_^...also can you please inform me of the minor flaws that you are referring to, as they will help me perfect my gift...thanks again and please don't be a stranger...:-)...

JamilahAyanna commented on UntiTTled

10-22-2009

Dis wuz very sincere and deeply written straight from da heart, and its often dat ppl believe to have loved an unknown face b4 its brought upon them and I lyke da route u took when writin dis 1.......very nyce :)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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