Violated

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    Violated
    Has anyone ever invaded your personal space?
    Taken something from you that you could never get back?
    Do you know how it feels to wonder each day how different your life would be if not for certain unfortunate events?
    Have you ever had your boundaries broken?
    Your innocence stolen?
    I don't think you've been violated as bad as I have.
    Have you had someone you and your family trusted do something to you so bad that your whole life you've been afraid to tell?
    Did these things that were done make you wish the person would just burn in hell?
    Could you ever know how I feel?
    Would you want to walk in my shoes and understand why my pain is hard to heal?
    I'll always have the scars but the memories will no longer be revealed.
    I refuse to let this take my life into a whirlwind of sorrow.
    I will NEVER feel sorry for myself, I feel sorry for him, because along with my innocence he took his one way ticket to hell.

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    ErikatheVampire commented on Violated

    09-22-2009

    I'm so happy you wrote this. I think i know of what you speak. And here to say you're not alone. You should be proud that you posted this. Stay strong A friend!
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    MrScip commented on Violated

    05-13-2009

    I've read several of your poems and it seems you've been here before. Perhaps in another life. Keep your head DOWN(to the paper)
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    AlexandriaPoole commented on Violated

    05-04-2009

    It is very difficult to express this type of pain in any work and you are very talented to have done it in this style. Very well done.
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    Realistic commented on Violated

    04-14-2009

    Troubled sleep and frettfull rest, cant wake up and be my best! Scrambeled pain and mental pain a tramatyzing past that leaves its stain...my virsion is called "tic tic boom"-published. You are not alone, God Bless you!
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    FiloRozzell commented on Violated

    04-14-2009

    That's the way to get that Sh** out of your system. I applaude the way you took you pain, sorrow, rage, and helplessness and blended it into beauty. Just remember there is nothing that anyone else can eat that will make your stomach sick. I am so proud of your strength and will to break down the wall of hurt to conquer that terrible experience but now you are so much stronger. Your words were meant for more than you this will help someone.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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