W a t e r

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  • Nature

    W a t e r

    droplets
    glimpse by the sun
    so beautiful
    sparkling like diamonds
    such as morning dews
    such as tears
    cold, satisfying thirst
    life depending on it
    we need it
    we need them
    keep and cherish it
    maintain sustainability
    just use to taste
    no water
    no life
    neither do us
    please
    do not let it upset
    gathered  drops
    become large and lots
    creating  flood
    rumbled, crashing blindly
    harm and kill
    please
    cherish and grateful
    to the nature
    on behalf of
    our children
    our grandchildren
    and the next generation
    to their future

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on W a t e r

    01-12-2011

    I like how you made a tribute to water in such a metaphoric way. I like how you use the things of nature and feeling like raindrops and tear drops.
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    meirozavian

    01/14/2011

    Thank you so much dear.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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