What Happened?

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    What Happened?

    I first knew something was wrong by the quiet.
    There was not a riot,
    not a noise, not a peep.
    The quiet seeps into me.
    I wonder,
    I look.
    The house felt drained as did me.
    This is not how it is so suppose to be!
    Our house was alive,
    like a garden full of sweet delight.
    But now it is dead!
    I ponder why?
    As I glided by each room,
    I knew I was doomed!
    Then a scream broke the silence,
    the scream was full of violence!
    I felt relief, but I was not glad,
    instead I felt mad!
    Running like the wind,
    down the hall,
    down the stairs,
    into a room.
    I discovered Isabelle in a state of shock,
    But my view was blocked.
    Then I saw,
    it was a crime,
    some one broke the law.
    I first knew something was wrong by the quiet.

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on What Happened?

    03-17-2009

    this is very good but it could have been longer and used more detail. sory but i couldnt get it better that an 8.3 it desers about a 9.3. :) nice poem.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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