what i see

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    what i see

     From the smile on your face
    to the twinkle in your eye
    I see a beautiful girl that i love
    from the curve of your lips
    to the warmthness of your heart
    I can see an angel from above
    From the kindness you show
    to the softness of your voice
    i see my future wife

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    rossmangeles commented on what i see

    07-07-2009

    I love your very romantic lines of praise for the woman who is now your apple of your eyes. Great write. Great poem! Keep it up! Cheers!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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