when I

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    when  you have siblingz this is when i come innn. and this is what i know

    when I

     When I look at you i see god
    When I look at you i see strength
    When I look at you i find hope
    When I look through you i find emotions
    When I look through you i see pain
    When I look through you i see hurt
    When I look at you i see hope
    When I look ahead you i see future!
    When I look behind you i see mistakes
    When I look around you i see disater
    When I look in you i see love
    When I look beside you i see me!

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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