When some one leaves you.

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    When some one leaves you.


    When someone leaves you, that’s beyond your control
    You start to wonder, are you that lost soul.

    Did they leave you behind, for gods work to do?”
    Or is it a phase that you are going through.”

    You start to panic, wondering what I can do,”
    Then you realize that the one who you thought,
    Had left you is watching over you.

    To me you’re my hero, that god sent to me,”
    You just saved my life, for all eternity,”

    You are my brother, for you were god send,”
    I pray that some day we will meet again.


    The love that you gave to your wife and kids,”
    Will never be forgotten, through god you shall live,”

    These short words I’m writing comes straight from my heart,”
    I love you my brother, a love that won’t stop.

    These words are dedicated to my Brother in-law Tito may you rests in Peace
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    SilverGirl commented on When some one leaves you.

    07-11-2009

    Tears are welling up inside of me. What a beautiful tribute.. I am sure you will enjoy my poem Amazing Grace.. and the comment I have above it.. Again.. very nice job.. keep up the good work.. Hugs.. SilverGirl

    leftymn139

    07/11/2009

    THANK YOU

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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