where am i now?

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  • Sadness

    where am i now?
    Thrown into the mix,

    no chance of survival, I know

    I've really done it this time.


    No place to hide,

    no escape in sight,

    there'll be no running this time.


    I find, I have you everyday

    but not for me, not my own

    not today, not this time.

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    strawb3rry14 commented on where am i now?

    10-14-2009

    cute but to simply, i think ju culda put so more effort but if thatz how ju feel what more can i say
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    jam4muzic commented on where am i now?

    08-21-2009

    Hm...it was alright. Nothing to drastic and not so BAM! It's like you barely put in any effort into your poem. The idea of what the poem is about is great. you could have executed it better. Why don't you check out my poems?
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    catarino commented on where am i now?

    05-07-2009

    familiar feelings reveal themselves.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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