Who Am I??

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    Who Am I??

     I am an accident
    awaiting to happen

    I am a death trap
    about to snap

    I am that unfinished
    molded piece of clay

    I am the one who doesn’t
    go out to play

    I am that girl that keeps
    her obsessions under parole

    I am that girl that never makes
    a confession about an obsession

    I am that girl that’s
    vertically challenged

    I am that blonde that trips
    over her own two feet

    I am that girl in which laughing at herself
    comes with no obstacle

    I am the student in which
    once in a while
    the right answers meet

    I am captain obvious
    but miss oblivious

    I am that abnormal teenager
    who doesn’t loathe Shakespeare

    I am the one that never sheds a tear
    and definitely not in fear

    I am the one whose
    friend is silence

    I am the one that both
    bores it and adores it

    I am that girl who prefers
    to be by herself

    I am that girl whose still not sure
    exactly who she wants to be

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Who Am I??

    04-01-2010

    Really very well thought and put Bio.. i liked it..................:)
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    SmallFrie

    04/01/2010

    Thank you very much!!

    Kaiprin commented on Who Am I??

    12-02-2009

    I like the introversion of this one. It's candid, yet wrapped in so many questions about self, influence, and where those can lead.
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    SmallFrie

    12/02/2009

    Thank You!!

    DeepEclipse commented on Who Am I??

    11-30-2009

    [I am captain obvious but miss oblivious] -- ah I like how you worded this. Two sides of one coin. [I am the one whose friend is silence] -- hell yeah. Silence judges none. It lets you be. Some would say it leads to madness, but there are perks to madness....:P Enjoyed this read. Was like you were staring at the mirror shouting out your truths to yourself.
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    SmallFrie

    11/30/2009

    lol...thanks again!...although the one downfall to silence is that it can be easily misread...one of my recently favorite quotation is "Silence is like a text, easy to misread." (author unknown)...

    SeanQuigley commented on Who Am I??

    11-23-2009

    Very awsome poem. Real.Honest,flows nicely i dig it
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    SmallFrie

    11/23/2009

    Thank You so much!! I'm never really sure what to think of my poems...they always seem extremely amature...it's encouraging to hear someone likes it.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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