Who are you?

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    Who are you?

    To find time for my thoughts, I walked away
    To a place for me, but it wasn't meant for today
    A lovely sent caught me, bringing me to a daze
    And what I saw next, I will surly remember for many days
    Goddess like perfection, curves meant to hold
    Hips seemingly crafted from a heavenly fold
    smooth sexy stomach with a gem that gave a glow
    And marked by a tatted rose, added for extra show
    Her lips, were longed by anyone who glanced
    Her hazel eyes so beautiful, no man had a chance
    long silky hair, that splayed down her back, irresistible
    drop dead gorgeous, I had to get next to her
    Stopped by the chains of my own fear
    I stood and watched her dissapear
    clouded by the chatter of the busy mall, I stood stunned
    Who are you, dearest angel, and could you have been the one

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    orbits4 commented on Who are you?

    09-03-2009

    You're a true poet. Your talent shows. Excellent imagery. I want to see more.

    HoneyHued commented on Who are you?

    01-14-2009

    I loved this, very charming.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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