Who I am

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    Who I am

    Who I am is someone who knows that life is hard but I still have live it, I also know that if I am going to go anywhere in life I have work hard at it.

    Who I am isn't someone who wants everything hand to me however I do expect to grow from earing my way in this world.

    Who I am is someone who can push myself through the hard parts of life but I don't want someone to come along and take everything apart that I did.

    Who I am isn't someone wants every riches know to man however when I leave this world I do want to go to most rewardness of all which is Heaven.

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    Sopradiction commented on Who I am

    05-18-2009

    good write kat-- i think you should maybe revise it a little though--a couple of words are missing? Strong concept and idea... keep writing

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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