Will she ever be happy?

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    • Vampire6
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    This poem is about a lot of people. Some of my best friends will tell me how they feel so I put the feelings together and came up with this.

    Will she ever be happy?

    Theres a girl i know that hides in the shadows,

    She lives life in fear and never knows whats next,

    She puts on a fake smile so no one will know

    that shes a nervous wreck.

     

    She crys and screams but nobody sees,

    She so much better than shes made out to be,

    Hidden in remorse and taking a killing course, 

    She screams but nobody hears,

    She wants to be heared but no body cares.

     

    At night when she sleeps,

    Her dreams turn to nightmares,

    Shes drowning in her own depresion

    and wishing her life could be undone,

    She begs for help but people just stare,

    So there lies an ever lasting question...

     

    Will she ever be happy?

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    baddreams commented on Will she ever be happy?

    01-09-2012

    i kno how she feels and well done and interesting poem
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    Vampire6

    01/11/2012

    Thank you :)

    angelchaser commented on Will she ever be happy?

    12-30-2011

    I can relate to some of what you have written here, depression can be very powerful. Nicely done.
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    Vampire6

    12/30/2011

    Yes it can and thank you

    angelchaser

    12/30/2011

    You are very welcome, my friend:)

    Lunabella commented on Will she ever be happy?

    12-30-2011

    Your friends were heard, by you. You share their story in a way to share their pain. Brava. They have a good friend in you.
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    Vampire6

    12/30/2011

    thanks :)

    jj1562 commented on Will she ever be happy?

    12-30-2011

    i feel for your friends i was there myself. Just tell them you noticed and care trust me they will perk up a little and it will make a diffrence.
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    Vampire6

    12/30/2011

    I'm sorry and they know i'm here, they were the first people to read this one.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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