World within a world

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    an old piece i found under the dust.

    Wednesday, November 1, 2006

    World within a world
    it all started madd Yaku
    grafting to the bubonic flu
    eyes became blue
    for indians it was poison in the stew
    Vatican Illuminati business with the jew
    the steps i conquere remain til 3002
    this you catch electric shock
    leaving bodily marks
     
    sell parts, rip out your heart
    without penetrating your skin
    channel thru walls like a jin
    flow magnificant
    oxygen hydrogen cells suffcient
    steam out the nostral, to raise the ambience
    move with precistance
    swim the nile Egyptian
    as it was written

    information, on walls to glide like hawks
    ceen from above, as below thoughts talk
    those who contest get outlined in chalk
    to the sea im like Noah and Ark
    to 7 heavens i errupt words to embark
    those who pick up, caught the spark
    thats 9 levels for your mind to settle
    days turn to night as we struggle
    the internal, eternal life is understandable
    as we enter the Solstice the earth wobble
    captured by nasa Hubble
    some got caught in the matrix mind scuffle
    this whole world we were living in was just a bubble

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    cousinsoren commented on World within a world

    06-09-2009

    A virtue of surealistic art is that it affords the onlloker or critic the liberty to interpret as he or she feels or sees , and not as the exponent of surrealistic art sees or feels, that is if he or she undersatnds what the surrelistic artist feels or sees. The metrica
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    PrinceSam360

    06/09/2009

    respect, much love . indeed there are bubbles, inner and outter layers.

    cousinsoren commented on World within a world

    06-09-2009

    This i a good piece of surrealism. Surrealististic artt is often seen as mad art. But one must not be fooled into thinking that a sufrrealistic is usually insane. Their deportment is more often deliberately created as a radical departure from the beaten road of conventions. A virtue of surrealism is tha
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    cousinsoren

    06/09/2009

    The metrical mode of this poem suggesting mental turbulence and cynicism is effective, bearing in mind that the ultimate objective of the surrealistic artist is to disturb and to shake the onlooker or critic out of his or her comfort, lassitude and somnolence. Hey! Ignore the typographical errror! Do you agree that "this whole world we are living in was just a bubble? Fitting end to this perfectly good surrealistic jumble. I enjoyed it. Rating" Mad enough and enjoyable enough, impressive and perfect enough to be rated 10+

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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