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WoW

That night was the best night I ever had
I was a witness to your body's abilities
you took charge and I can't complain
you played with my mind among other things
so sentual it was you and I
one, two, three, four, five times
WoW...five times
F this rhyme
there wasn't a thin line between us last night
My body so tight
and loose all the same
You went in and again
You get a ten X five
Man I thought of you for days
Didn't know what to say...speechless
I wanted to feel you again
I want you to be my lover
You're too good to be unclaimed
Can I have you're weekly services?
I'm too old for playing games
I'm gonna let you know what it is
I got a beast only you can tame
So I'll see you tomorrow night
I know you'll do my body right
We don't ever need a light cuz it shines within
I give you an A+ from begining to end
once again, F this rhyme
That's exactly how I feel
I'm ready for you to come and make this love real

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A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Andria910’s Poems (4)

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Midnight Madness 1
WoW 0
You 0
Thankfully Me 2