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You

an exact replica of what I ever wanted
to achieve the life I had envisioned
for the life is of ours to share
and there will never be another so rare
join me in building this love
an endless passion for us two
only you and I have the answers
to the questions of this life long lesson
I'll love you forever more
you'll love me beyond my time
a love like mine you'll never find
but I will forever be there
in your heart our love grows so strong
the thickest skin your love did mend
so now I'm yours for eternity
keep me in your thoughts for I need
a matramony; we both agreed
hold me tight I won't lose grip
and we'll stay connected at the hip
a kiss upon your lovely lips
You are all I need and ever wanted
a dream, a fantasy, a life of love
that's what you and I share
and there will never be another so rare.

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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