You Are Love

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    You Are Love

    You are love

    You are my creator King

    I failed you Lord yet you lift me up

    I bow down before my creator King

    You know the deepest me yet you love me like a deepest sea

    The waves are hard

    The wind is cold yet you embrace me because

    You are LOVE!

     

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    Shang commented on You Are Love

    07-25-2010

    Thanks for the comment and thanks for the encouragement...I should write more:)
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    ccslim commented on You Are Love

    08-12-2009

    Great Write!!! This has super content with the flow of sound up high. I do think if you kept this high through out with aka "king" sound you could add a bit more!
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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