You Were Right
You were right about the world about its opinion,
the over look, pretentious to the core.
A sky of hurt lingers beyond the seas with cram waters still
the fishes are not friendly.
The salt are simply the words that corrupts like having a seed of sin,
You were right.
The sea needs attention even if it hurts deep below the surface; it’s only a salt
Lake crying for help trying to be a sea.
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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.
T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
|---|---|---|
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
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| A Dreamer | 13 | 06/02/2009 |
| You Were Right | 17 | 05/21/2009 |
| Unspoken Words | 10 | 05/15/2009 |
| The Strongest Love | 7 | 05/13/2009 |
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| I Sit and Wait | 9 | 05/13/2009 |
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