your touch

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    your touch


    Your touch
    Your touch it warms the cold soul within me.
    Your smile
    Your smile enhances every days waking.
    Your laugh
    Your laugh the humour that happys my day.
    So with all this you mean to me,
    why can’t you be with me, here, today.

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    sherry122 commented on your touch

    05-31-2009

    Beautiful words, but I think you should have given it another title, cause the main concept of your poem is not “your touch”. But I like your poem very much.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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