#214E

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    #214E

    Unnatural reactionaries
    Viable beliefs
    Indescriptive monologues
    of who we claim to be

    Consequential sacrifice
    Undetermined malcontent
    Incandescent youth lost to this place.

    Don't tell me that you know what's going down
    You never had a part to play in this
    You were never anywhere around
    me, when the world was falling down
    So who's to say that I shoud be there now?

    Predetermined losses
    Projected lack of gain
    Spontaneous martyrdom
    The only source of fame

    Poisoned by complacency,
    My life may seem ill-fated,
    It can be a viscious killer,
    Yet so often underrated

    Don't tell me that you know what's going down
    You never had a part to play in this
    You were never anywhere around
    me, when the world was falling down
    So who's to say that I shoud be there now?

    So send me your condolences
    In the form of misplaced sympathy
    And watch me turn my back on all your shit.

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    Legos12 commented on #214E

    07-29-2009

    Daaaaang, this is great writing. And im sure its true. wow. It actuallys sounds like it could be lyrics to a Linkin Park song.. but better, cuz its from ras experience. I hope a lot of people read this,, cuz it might open some eyes...

    BooTz commented on #214E

    07-27-2009

    -bows to u-u are one amazing writer. i've enjoyed every piece i have read from u...this is no different. poe would be proud

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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