a contrite heart

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a contrite heart

I hurt you.
Painfully, violently,
...willfully and willingly...
not
so much
but still.

And, in this,
I hurt me.
Painfully, violently,
...willfully and willingly...
maybe
even more.

To hurt me
for hurting you.
Does my knowing this,
feeling this,
mean I have taken a step?
The first step
on the tragic
road
of contrition?
Redemption?
...forgiveness?

Please.

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Spacer commented on a contrite heart

02-06-2009

I like your style down to the Point and just SImple...Great poem...reall depth...

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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