my reflection

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    my reflection

    and its in this,
    in you,
    the eyes that look at me
    and reflect.
    whomever you are
    and wherever you die,
    i look at me through you
    and try to see me
    as you do.

    not to be as you want.

    but to see if what i want
    is looking back.

    if who i am making
    myself to be
    is seen by you.

    am i in there?

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    Spacer commented on my reflection

    01-11-2009

    It was Good... Can't wait for some moer of your work

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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