A feather fell from heaven

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A feather fell from heaven

A feather fell from heaven
it landed in my heart,
it gave me hopes and dreams
I thought would never part.

It tickled every corner
of my souls accent,
it stroked me with wisps
of granduer I knew it was
heaven sent.

Then as the wind picked up
the feather then took flight,
and left me in a darkened place
absent from its light.

I searched my heart for traces
to see what was left behind,
that's when I found the truth
it was there the whole time.

Now I know I'm beautiful
an amazing creature of light,
tempered by my spirit
I know I'll be alright.

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dragonfly1023 commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-27-2009

this poem is beautifully phrased and I love each of those powerful couplets. looks to me like you've had a wonderful revelation :D love it!!!

randomthoughts commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-27-2009

:)................................................................................................(:

WordSlinger commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-25-2009

wow, what a beautiful poem, and very precious, this is a very image that makes me wonder where the flock of Angels can be found, :), I love your gift.

soulwriter commented on A feather fell from heaven

06-25-2009

You will be alright and that is evidenced in this beautiful soulful write from the heart. Good job and wonderful heavenly flow!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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