Drifting

5 Comments

Drifting

Drifting like the wind in and out

of time and space,

circling around till once again

I see your face.

 

Never obtaining what might

have been mine,

I sit here again in and out of time.

 

like ships that pass in the nights

of old,

I feel there is a story being told.

 

One that's deep and full of wonder,

dare the stars spill out their plunder.


Filling in where love went wrong

creating a bond

that's true and strong.

Poem Comments

(5)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

randomthoughts commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

(: ..................................... :) SMILE (: .............................................. :)

WordSlinger commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

Every word of this is just ass kicking, The beginning is really good, This poem touches me alot, good poem there ;), my friend, poetrygal45

Artie commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

The rhythm of this, and the word usage, are perfect. This is a great poem. The whole piece has a soothing feel to it, like a beautiful song. I can hear the melody in my mind.

FLAWLES commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

Another nice piece of work. I like your rhythm with this. Seems like someone's out of sight; but not out of mind.

NekodaGirl commented on Drifting

06-23-2009

Wow I love your rhythm, the whole poem is so beautiful ^.^ the last three stanzas I really like, they just rang in my head after I read them.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

poetrygal45’s Poems (62)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Apples 1
This is a love story 2
Gone I go now~ 1
Kisses~ 1
Beyond~ 0
Tears~ 2
Beyond what you see 0
Deeper waters 1
Rambles 0
The mountains are calling ~ 1
She sang~ 0
tic toc 0
Uncut chains 0
Love holds me.... 2
My Garden 1
kick 1
Repentance 0
emotional abuse 8
untitled 0
Journey 8
Yet 6
Another fight 9
Vanities Crime 9
Lost innocence 5
loves, holy, fire. 12
Baptism 19
The hands of faith 7
behind these tears 5
A bit of blarney 10
A daughters grief 6
echoes of goodbye 7
Heartaches cry 6
To love myself at last 8
Set free 3
Unfit love 5
A feather fell from heaven 4
Goodbye 105
on the wings of a dove 1
Drifting 5
The kiss 5
Flawless wings 4
night come softly 1
forest song 2
mystery's plan 6
Young lovers 10
Black Roses 9
Expectant heart 5
His Face 1
Her need. 2
Majesty in Flight. 7
On my knees 6
My gift 6
In moments like that. 2
Wilted flower 6
Two shades of gray. 2
In His foot steps. 3
Under his wings 3
One single rose.. 9
A symphony of praise 3
brooding eyes... 4
Little raggamuffin 13
broken bird 7