A rushed poet, Practice makes...

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    A rushed poet, Practice makes...

     Rushed to font his inner most ambition
       to run.
    It was simple.
    Shorts, a run a stop
    round n round till the Moon is crowned
    Crowed by the sweat
    Knocked up
    exhausted
    flaunted chest flip flatter breast breathe deep to the beat
    Again and again I gain drained by pain cause my energy is sane
    Thought too supple flattery
    Skip-hop n hip drops
    rain takes no offense and water drinks my sweat
    tomorrow more practice.

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    Shelby commented on A rushed poet, Practice makes...

    10-08-2009

    I felt like I just lost five pounds. Hehe this is really quite vrilliant. I'm not sure if is hypothetical running or for real, but I liked it anyway. Forgive me if there was some symbolism here, I am just not as litterate as you and it takes me awhile. I declare this a ten!
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    Trailmixed

    10/09/2009

    Thanks yo!

    ginga commented on A rushed poet, Practice makes...

    09-12-2009

    trail, inexplicable, like a deep hole one is trying to escape you pry all the right words together for our fantastic entertainnment! ginga
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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