Just a thought

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    Just a thought
    Why initially
    I can't say
    That I'm pleased
    Confused is your mistake
    Wrong nor right
    Its what you make
    Not happy
    Why people treat each Identity emotionless

    Teach fear
    Hurts.
    Stop it
    All of humans can't cope
    Frustrating to watch
    My cries aren't
    My cares are
    To me
    Sad dictates our sorrows slow approach to madness
    Like glass given those who take
    Their shards stained simulate
    Live
    Tell no body's remake
    Peace right?
    Battles efficient enough?
    It's always something until
    Alas!
    Distilled our fate is out of commission
    As minds
    We mimic only their vision
    Blind is death
    We are not foreseen

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    Trailmixed commented on Just a thought

    03-08-2011

    Thank you for comments :D
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    wwjd72 commented on Just a thought

    08-03-2009

    wise speaking into the thicket of a dark empty webb no one knows our cry?I hear you and feel it it truth.
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    litldeer commented on Just a thought

    03-06-2009

    I liked the layout very much. This is the first time I am reding your workand I must say you are very talented.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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