A Step BaCk!!
Last night i took a step back, i wonder why i did. Now my head is buzzing like someone turned down the TrEbLe && upped the mids! A step OMG what was i thinking.. Me && you back together, i must not have been listening: To my parents, my friends those who love me most. they said you were no good. I thought maybe i was just misunderstood. You don't understand what you do to me! When i'm with you, theres nothing i CAN see! But you, yeah its true.. iLy*.. But our forbidden love is like poision.. Killing me softly.. A step back.. Caused the death of me, how could this be? That one mistake killed a SupaMann like me? I stepped back into a ten foot deep hole, that no shovel could dig me out of.. All.. for love?A Step BaCk!!
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A freestyle about what happened last night...
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kochab commented on A Step BaCk!!
08-10-2009
- kinda heavy dude. I can definatly see that thees some history with this person and how you feel about them despite what friends and family may think...Sounds like you kinda got some discouraged thought s too but are trying to remain hopefull. Well constructed look into your life. I dig it.
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