A Walk With Sister
I am a ghost to my environmenta harlem-shaking harmony cat
flaunting on summer trails
with her
A wilderness consumes me
but I go unto it quitely
until we disagree
then, I speak sweetly
as I am a child again
A Walk With Sister
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- hippideeth
- Hey guys! I recently published a poetry chapbook in memory of my mammaw. It's available on amazon.com and createspace e store. It's titled If I Settle Down... by Charles Cross.
a harlem-shaking harmony cat
flaunting on summer trails
with her
A wilderness consumes me
but I go unto it quitely
until we disagree
then, I speak sweetly
as I am a child again
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angel1999 commented on A Walk With Sister
06-24-2009
- I liked that poem. its great that you have talent and I hope that you post more poems like this. you have a gift for writing. I plan on hoping for a good story someday. Well, I better go for now. Hope to hear from you soon. Your friend, April R. Wach
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mdpoetgirl commented on A Walk With Sister
06-23-2009
- I like the sweet innocence of this poem and the cool phrase you use in the beginning - "a harlem-shaking harmony cat." I'm curious as to any commentary you might have written to go with this poem. Is this a poem about the relationship between you and your sister? Sounds like maybe she's an older sister and the both of you don't get along too well or don't seem to fit, but you tolerate her because she's your sister. Sounds also like she's a bit intimidating to you? Please explain a little. Just curious.
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06/23/2009
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