About Me (Myspace)

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  • AlphaSmart
  • is sighing heavily, attempting to release the inner chaos

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this is the little entry I wrote about myself in my myspace profile.

About Me (Myspace)

My soul was lost in a frozen hell.
My body has long since been vacant.
My hallow corpse and rotting flesh
Are proof that I do not fake it.
I am me and that's what you know.
I wear all my faults on my sleeve.
I bear my emotions proudly.
My corrupted heart doth bleed.
My burning affection is clear,
My gayness shown to the world,
My mental instability bore calmly,
My body is no longer curled.
I am flat out and open,
I shall never lie to you.
To you all I make a promise:
Everything I am is true.

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Chaos128 commented on About Me (Myspace)

11-07-2009

You're the director in your life, Alpha. You're also the producer, the writer, the editor and the star. You don't have to explain it to anybody, either, all you've got to do is make it clear. Nice work!

Photojan12 commented on About Me (Myspace)

09-27-2009

I feel a saddness here that should not be. You are much more than this and I hope you have found that out. Poetry is a way to express our pain and also our happiness. I wish you great happiness.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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