I Hate You

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  • AlphaSmart
  • is sighing heavily, attempting to release the inner chaos

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Devoted to Mother

I Hate You

I hate you
for treating me like shit,
for believing that you're better,
for being better.
I hate you
for making me honestly believe
that the latter is true.
I hate you
for betraying my trust,
for humiliating me,
for confiding in me.
I hate you
for saying you love me,
for depending on me,
for making me love you,
totally dependent on our relationship.
I hate you
for making jokes,
for singing badly with me,
for the million smiles we share.
I hate you
for fucking up afterwards like you always do.
I hate you
for blaming me,
for turning everyone against me,
including myself.
I hate you
for causing my laugh lines,
for causing my scars.
I hate you
for encouraging me,
for beaming at my accomplishments,
for tearing me down at one mistake.
I hate you
for taking out your anger on me
when you secretely hate your boss.
I hate you
for being a hypocrite,
for bitching about my faults
when they are the same as your own.

I hate you for being you.
I hate you for making me...
for making me be your clone.

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Crush commented on I Hate You

11-27-2010

wow, wow ! i was so snatched up in this starightaway. i was expecting a different ending but by no means was i disappointed, actually i was more pleased. well done alpha smart. makes me think.

Photojan12 commented on I Hate You

09-22-2009

This is a real picture of how we give our power away to another. Keep your power and become happy and strong.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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