♥ Poetic Avenue ♥


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My Very 1st Poem!!!

♥ Poetic Avenue ♥

                                   ♥ Poetic Avenue
Posted on poetic avenue waitn for my poet 2 come rescue me. Blind me not only by yo words but stimulate my mind body n soul. Make me climax through my heart til i float so high i get lost n find myself on cloud nine. Embrace me n yo arms neva letting me go making me feel my home is wit u.... Take my heart n show me the true meaning of love.. Not one that hurts but one that gives me orgasms through your touch.. show me how it feels 2live for eternity on yo block

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Phoenix9 commented on ♥ Poetic Avenue ♥


very good , well written and flows well, you touch the soul and show life is fresh and worth every minute of it

carmentis commented on ♥ Poetic Avenue ♥


the placid places of the anatomy of the shell that is so soft and sensual of the womens temple is a delight a thirt of on ending paradise , to give pleasure and receive none is not right but in giving a bit there is a bliss that you can see and that its sefl conjured in the eyes of a smiling lover and smiling soul mate is thank and fufillment enough, the block of house will be rumble one day the passion shred in those buildings will live as long as the passions were gving and thrown out into the universe and love never ceases

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

MzzEvans’s Poems (3)

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