Actions Show Love

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  • Lost Love

    Actions Show Love

    Life can be so unfair
    When I'm not around you, you want me there.
    When I am, your almost pulling out your hair.
    I ask myself, does he really want me here?
    Being without you is what I fear...
    Constantly, I try to give you all I have, treating you the best way I can.
    Just to show you how my love for you is so grand.
    It seems to me it only causes you to get mad.
    Please don't tell me I haven't tried and don't run away and try to hide.
    The hurt you inflict on me feels like hell is burning me inside.
    There have been so many times I've held back tears, and swallowed my pride.
    My brain is beginning to feel fried...
    I wont be your puppet on a string
    I'd rather bless your finger with my ring.
    When will your eyes open so you can see, just how foolish you can be.
    You would be so foolish if you were to abandon me...
    I couldn't began to explain the pain that would bring.
    I wouldn't, couldn't care about a thing, not even how bueatiful the birds can sing...
    For you to treat me right is what I fiend
    Please don't curse, please don't yell, please don't scream...
    Just your love and understanding is all I need.
    Your actions let me know how you feel towards me...
    If you were a garden, I would be nothing but a weed.
    So I ask you please be fair
    Show me the love I believe is there.






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    poetheart87 commented on Actions Show Love

    07-30-2009

    I really can relate to you here. Since I don't know much about your loved one, I can't pass judgement. But I can say, keep your head up, and be strong. It sounds as though this person really loves you, just doesn't know how to show it and because of that, has built a wall against you. Your writing is absolutely wonderful. Your feelings speak to the reader loud and clear. Keep writing and keep your head up. I know how it feels to have someone be so against you whenever your around each other. It's hard and sometimes, heart breaking. But you sound strong.

    mzmaldita

    03/05/2010

    thank you for your input, my writing is my way of escaping all the struggles in my life. it takes alot of stress and anger from me and it feels even better to know that i really have a way of turning my pain and hurts into something people can enjoy... so thanks for your comment...

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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