AM BREAKING

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    AM BREAKING

    Every time I watch the stars

    I see the twinkle in your eyes

    Am reminded of the many memories we shared,

    Every time I look up

    I see the moon smiling down at me

    And am reminded of your laughter

    But…………………….

     

    My heart is aching,

    My soul is dying

    And am breaking

     

    I’ve loved a million times

    And this heart has crashed many times

    I’ve played many love games

    And this soul has lost many times

    That’s why…………….

     

     

    My heart is aching,

    My soul is dying

    And am breaking

     

     

     

    Today I hoped would be different

    That the sun would finally shine

    And that I would not crash again

    That the tears would finally mend

    And that the pain would finally fade

    But………

     

     

     

    My heart is still aching,

    My soul is dying

    And am breaking

     

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    blvdobd2009 commented on AM BREAKING

    05-14-2013

    When I saw your comment and thought about what you said I had to look at your work and I saw AM BREAKING, I know you understand and you so effortlessly and simplistically riddle of the pain of your heart...Been there done it still doing it and God how how you have blessed me because I know someone truly understands! I give you a ten mami!

    Chaos128 commented on AM BREAKING

    01-21-2010

    You display strong feelings in this piece, KG. Realizing a situation is wrong for you is the first (and most difficult) step toward correcting it. The emotion and intelligence shown in this work tell me you're already aware of that. Great work!

    kenyangal

    02/09/2010

    thanx chaos128....

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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