amazing love

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    amazing love


    Changing my world with a blink of an eye
    Is something that I can not deny
    You put my heart from worst to best
    That is why I treasure you my love


    You don't know what you have done for me
    You pushed me to the best that I can be
    You hold me to highest degree
    Only so I can be free


    When your with me you will not cry a single a tear
    And never fear being a multimillionaire
    You have given me a life I could live worthwhile
    When u smile every half mile


    It so magical those feelings u mad me have
    To bring back my faith that almost didn’t have
    Now my life is a dream come true now that I have u
    It all began when I was loved by you


    Now I have found what I am looking for
    It's you and your love and nothing more
    It feels like a 3rd world war
    I have ever felt this before


    I wish I could talk till the end of day
    But now I am out of things to say
    So I'll end by the line you know
    "I LOVE YOU" more than you will ever no

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    Worthless commented on amazing love

    10-14-2009

    it's good but your young and love is fake! But it's a nice dream...

    Hypothicus commented on amazing love

    09-10-2009

    You're very free with the way you write, and that's what poetry is all about. I can definitely feel the love you have and I can tell it means something beyond words. I do suggest proofreading if organization is a concern for you...but to each his own. Keep it up man.

    Sydney commented on amazing love

    09-05-2009

    this is excellent. its sweet too. theres nothing i would see changed here. keep up the good work

    bluewolf commented on amazing love

    08-27-2009

    My only suggestion is to work on spelling and wording; otherwise this is a beautiful poem that will allure the romantic hearth. Well done!!

    FreedomFromFear commented on amazing love

    08-24-2009

    Once again, another great poem:) It was really sweet and this girl is obviously important to you lol Keep up the good work!

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