love of my life

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    love of my life

     I will love you with all my heart
    To have forever never let us fall apart
    This is a promise engrained in me
    Take my hand and let it be 
    I will wipe ur tears with no questions asked From me
    No more will your feelings be masked
    This is a promis i make to you
    Look into my eyes and fallow through
    I know i love you bye just looking into your eye
    i will never forget u not even on the day that i die
    this is a promise of my passion for you
    smile at me and make it tue
    and to only you this gift i shall confide
    this is a promise so incredibly real
    kiss me my love and you shall feel free

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    sk8ergirl commented on love of my life

    08-22-2009

    wow that was a great poem keep writing dude and it is great how you sho your feelings
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    Dancer022597 commented on love of my life

    08-22-2009

    OMG! This is what a love poem should be written like! Sweet and covered with love! Don't let her get away! Keep up the great work!
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    graceladymn commented on love of my life

    08-21-2009

    Who could fail to kiss a kiss for that? Well composed and presented.
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