the Love Of My Dove

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    the Love Of My Dove

    The hardest thing to do is
    wach the one u love
    Fall fo another dove
    in the city of love

    You think your unworthy of
    the love of other doves
    because you cant escape your last dove
    That you loved

    I try and talk you out
    of going back to that dove
    But you are to much in love
    that u dont see my love

    In the terms of my love
    That you are unworthy of
    Makes me think of
    The love of my beloved dove

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    sk8ergirl commented on the Love Of My Dove

    08-22-2009

    wow it is a little confusing but i can see what you mean. some of the most confusing things are the best great write

    graceladymn commented on the Love Of My Dove

    08-21-2009

    It doesn't make sense to me, could you explain it?

    JeremyBeard

    08/21/2009

    i wrote it when the girl i loved still loved her ex and was always going back to him but i loved her alot kinda make sence

    JeremyBeard

    08/21/2009

    i wrote it when the girl i loved still loved her ex and was always going back to him but i loved her alot kinda make sence

    FatalDesire commented on the Love Of My Dove

    08-21-2009

    Good poem, you should post more of them on here. Keep writing.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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