angel of death

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heres the one that was missing i forgot to hit a button i am quite a dark person but hope you like my writings

angel of death

i lay here in the dark the only sounds is my ragged breathing and a blues cd  playing in background .i am so weary and alone .As i wait for the angel of death my last lover to take me in his cold embrace my thoughts turn to why i ended here and i knew i would rather sleep then to keep on fighting.oh to have sweet release from these chains keeping me earthbound .i feel a cold breath on my face he is here! he enfolds me in his arms a kisses my cild lips i am not afraid .i look into his stormy icy eyes and see all my pain and regrets and i feel them leaving me he has taken them away  now i have peace and can sleep

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hajile18 commented on angel of death

06-25-2009

VERY GOOD EXCELLENT DESCRIPTION. THIS GIVES ME A VERY COLD FEELING BUT ITS A VERY HOT POEM LOL I LOVE IT

sorrow5

06/29/2009

thank u so much for comment i am so glad u liked it

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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angel of death 1
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