Angelic face by amber

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Angelic face by amber

I walk in the room and see peoples faces happy as can be people start talk to me but the only thing i can i see is your Angelic face my hart beats at a million miles per hour,Oh how i cant see your face for a little bit like maybe 3 or 4 weeks.But the  pain inside is beating on me like a African drum,harder and harder till my eyes of seeing you starts to fad away.

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Daypup5 commented on Angelic face by amber

03-27-2011

hahah i am soooo good at writeing :3 TO THE HACKER STOP GOING ON MY FREINDS ACCOUNT please

girlygirl1234 commented on Angelic face by amber

02-22-2011

i like it alot...haha and i will be jealous but anyways i give you a 10.......GG

brandice commented on Angelic face by amber

01-08-2011

i love it so much great job amber .........

KING commented on Angelic face by amber

01-08-2011

It hurts to see the ones we want, but often cannot have.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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