i saw u

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i saw u

i saw u sitting next to me
i saw u sitting across from me
i saw u looking into my eyes
i saw u breathingeat carefully
i saw u breathing hard
i saw u eat the food
i saw u drink the water
i batted my eyes
i breathed along
i ate and drank beside u
now what
     PUPPY!!!!!

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brandice commented on i saw u

04-03-2011

WOW WHEN I READ THIS RIGHT NOW I FORGOT WHAT IT SAID SO I WAS SHOCKED WHEN I READ THE FINAL WORD... PUPPY? REALLY? WOW!!! I HAD NO IDEA...

Shelbylolann commented on i saw u

03-02-2011

LMAO I LOVE IT CANDI! TTYS! 10 HERE!!!!!!! :) LOVE SHELBY

brandice commented on i saw u

10-28-2010

OFCOURSE I LIKE IT i wrote it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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