Another Tomorrow

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    Poem was written after my Aunts death.

    Another Tomorrow

            Why me God?
              Why must you call me home now?
              This isn't fair.
              This can't be right.
               I want more life.
            Why can't I have another tomorrow?
            Why me God?
              I have endured what was dealt to me.
              I have suffered.
              I have felt loss and sorrow.
              I am no stranger to pain.
             Why can't I have another tomorrow?
             Why me God?
               I know I am no saint.
               I know I am not perfect.
               I did the best I could.
               I always tried to do the right thing.
             Why can't I have another tomorrow?
             Why me God?
                My time here was way to brief.
                Why can't I stay a little longer?
                My family still needs me.
                Why do you summon me now?
              Why can't I have another tomorrow?
              Why me God?
                 Why can't I have another tomorrow?
                 No more pain to endure
                 Unconditional love
                 Absolute freedom
               Oh God!...Now I see the light.
              

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    Drifter commented on Another Tomorrow

    06-02-2009

    Very moving and powerfull, faith is always good and sometimes death isnt always bad right, your good
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    kinnycut

    06/03/2009

    I appreciate your comment, and your grasp of the meaning is perfect. Thank You!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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