Awakening moment

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    Awakening moment
    Your soul awaits freedom. You can escape this. You don’t need it.

    Spread your wings fly far away.

    Don’t put yourself through this another day.
    Awake yourself from this dreadful sleep. call it the awakening moment. Get on your feet.

    your alive,your alive.

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    walkb99 commented on Awakening moment

    07-25-2012

    an awakening, a moment of release, a time to put life in perspective. fear or flight, escaping to a new existence
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    Viper89 commented on Awakening moment

    12-20-2010

    DEEP!!! Very well done and good read!!! 10 from me!!!
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    Ducez commented on Awakening moment

    07-02-2010

    very nice this has open my eyes for a few things great poem
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    charmlessman2d commented on Awakening moment

    04-06-2010

    thank you. i just read this as a slap in the face. a wake up call. a green reminder. to pick up my sad feet and start walking. where to, who cares. i love how its short. sweet. and direct to the point. keep writing. and i'll keep reading.thanks for sharing
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    Chaos128 commented on Awakening moment

    03-18-2010

    There's more than one way to take this - It's kind of the glass half full of half empty kind of thing. Being a noncommittal optimist, I'll go with the positive spin. Well done, Miss Love!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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