together

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    together

    I was caught under the influence of love it was like intoxication.

    I fell in love with you and you had my heart incarcerated.

    When we are together it’s like only the two of us are here.

    I lean over and whisper in your ear can we stay here forever.

    You are my irreplaceable love.

    When I’m here with you it’s like I’m lost in a succulent dream.

    I look into your eyes and see the light that’s needed in my life.

    At points like this I wish life had a pause button but it doesn’t so instead let’s be happy with what we have and live our life in the present.

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    Chaos128 commented on together

    12-16-2009

    Thanks alot, YL, now I'll spend the rest of my life wishing I had a "succulent dream" ha ha.

    phatdaddee commented on together

    05-13-2009

    A succulent dream!!!! only 3 words but extremely thought provoking! My intellect has been stimulated and pleasantries dance in my brain!

    brandon commented on together

    05-10-2009

    good job

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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