Become Closer

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    This is from my heart

    Become Closer

    When you are down and out you should come closer to the lord
    When you are in pain just call on Jesus and you'll because closer to him
    Become closer to the lord and everything will come out great 
    When you need healing just say god I need you and you'll become closer to the one above
    Become closer and keep him first in your life 
    Call on Jesus if you feel distance from him
    When you need a helping hand just come closer to the lord and everything's going to turn out right 
    Become closer And stay close to the lord

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    Spyke commented on Become Closer

    11-18-2009

    Wow! It seems like this poem comes from your heart. Honestly, I'm not a good writer yet, compared to those who are in this site. I, somehow, am limited of words. But what I'm currently doing is that I'm applying rhyming on my poems. Maybe you could do the same. God Bless to your future write-ups!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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