Hurting

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    The things that does on in your life

    Hurting

    I'm hurting inside
    I'n not myself because i am hurting all over my body
    My pride was took from me 
    So I feel like another person
    People say I've changed and I'm not the same person and I believe them
    I walk talk and act different so I've been told
    I feel nasty
    I feel something more then my pride has been took away from me
    I'm unconfrontable around others
    I'm sometimes unconfrontable around my own partner
    I'm always scared or neverous about somthing
    I'm hurting
    I can't be alone 
    Sometimes I can't sleep
    Sometimes I just seat up and not even close my eyes
    I'm always hurting
    I'm never really happy anymore
    People has told me I don't even smile anymore
    My feelings can  be hurt much easier now
    I'm always worried and wanting to cry but i don't
    I find myself short of breath feeling sick and ect
    Hurting thats all I feel when I'm alone
    I find myself in a deep day dream
    I even find myself having dreams were I'm falling and taking my life
    Hurting I wish I did not have to hurt anymore
    Iwish I could be the person I use to be before i had all of what is not my pride took away from me

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    AmadeusEx commented on Hurting

    07-01-2009

    its sad that you feel this way, my heart goes out to you, i hope through the power of poetry and self expression you will work through these dark emotions and come out stronger and happier on the other side

    Focus

    07/01/2009

    Thank u for taking the time to rate my poems and i will come out on the other side with my head up high

    daniel081180 commented on Hurting

    07-01-2009

    This poem speaks of deep pain. I am truly sorry for what you are feeling thanks for sharing that part of you. Keep writing things will get better in time i promise.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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