BLACK RAIN

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  • Working Through Depressio

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    Depression tried to extend its visit

    BLACK RAIN

    Black rain
                  cascades down smooth walls
    of granite,
                     the levels are
    rising
              threatening to overtake me
    trying to
                      smother me.
    I
         see no
                    reflections
    in the
                   droplet
                                     the
    void
                 is
                           absorbing
    always

                          taking...

    BLACK
                     RAIN

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    Sx9 commented on BLACK RAIN

    01-16-2011

    yes sometime it does,but we fail to understand the vibes it bring,,not so with your rain for blackness is what we live,rain is what was us clean with pure mess of wetness,,
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