Black Roses (Part2) "Awareness"

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Part 2 of my 15 Part Vampire series, "Black Roses"....please read all, as it is a complete story, told in poetic form. Thanks and please, enjoy! :)

Black Roses (Part2) "Awareness"

For centuries I've been locked in this gloom,

Feasting at night by the light of pale moon.

Coming to terms with this musty old room;

My refuge, my solace, this damnable tomb!

 

Once I was mortal and walked freely as you.

A woman of substance impeccably groomed.

Dreams of being a bride, face glowing like dew!

Now as Queen of Undead, I'm eternally doomed.

 

Roses of red were always my choice,

When I was alive and still had a voice.

And dining with friends was cause to rejoice;

Now I've feasted on them, few regrets, little noise.

 

Forever I'm damned to wandering alone,

With a pure, aching hunger that cuts to the bone.

Doomed to silence and darkness wherever I roam;

Nevermore to know comfort, companion or home.

 

Gaily by lamplight, right under your noses,

I linger in shadows; you strike mortal poses,

Unaware of how naivety neglects, predisposes,

Your fate to my thirst and this "gift" of.. black.. roses.

 

Rose Haddix copyright@08/23/2005

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MindNumbing commented on Black Roses (Part2) "Awareness"

02-16-2010

A great continuation from part one... cant wait to read the rest.

queenrosered

02/16/2010

TYVM! You ARE into Vampires, ur not kidding, lol! GREAT! Thanks again! Rose! XD

Charlie23 commented on Black Roses (Part2) "Awareness"

01-22-2010

This is so very cool! I love how it goes to the end with black roses!

queenrosered

01/22/2010

Thanks Charlie! I love that you read the 3 parts already posted and really hope that as I post the rest of this series, that you will remain a "fan" and want to read more...the story deepens and takes interesting twists and turns, as you will see! Peace and Love, Rose! XD

queenrosered commented on Black Roses (Part2) "Awareness"

01-21-2010

Thanks again Peery! Hope I can count on you, as I post the other parts, to continue reading...will let u know when they post, OK? Peace and Love, Rose! XD

kpeery09 commented on Black Roses (Part2) "Awareness"

01-21-2010

Very Very Very Nice, Its good, another "gold star" in a way but since we cant give gold stars for real I'll give you 10. Second title to Vampire ones of mine are Vampire Ritual-part 2

koolmom0 commented on Black Roses (Part2) "Awareness"

01-16-2010

Very nice carry over from part one. I enjoyed the read. Kool

queenrosered

01/16/2010

And once more Kool, I thank YOU! XD

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.