DRAGONFLIES

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  • queenrosered
  • Waiting for escrow to close on our new house in Vegas...will still visit Mexico often! Sorry I've been away so long from this site! Great to be "home" :D

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In Cabo San Lucas, Mexico, we have a two-story home and a terrace up on the second floor which overlooks the pool. One night, while sitting and watching (and yes, smokin a blunt) I watched the dragonflies and this poem came to me. It was mystical, magical, fantastical! Hope you enjoy! Thanks! :)

DRAGONFLIES

From the terrace on my roof,
Gazing at the pool below,
 In wonder rapt, I watch,
 As the water gently flows.

 I stay hidden in the darkness,
 (Save the light from yon full moon)
 So amazed at nature's largess,
 Spying fairies as they spoon.

 Yes, I know that it sounds crazy,
 But I've seen these wondrous steeds;
 Dragonflies with winged ladies,
 Astride their backs, to waters lead.

 I watch in awe as they dismount
 And hold my breath, lest they should hear.
 Such beauty one cannot discount;
 While they bathe, their men appear.

 Dragonflies dipping and soaring,
 As naked fairies play and kiss.
 From above the rain starts pouring;
 All my life, I've dreamed of this.

 I hear the tinkle in their laughter,
 As two by two, they mount their steeds.
 I know I'll watch for them hereafter;
 If only in my sweetest dreams.

 So when you spy a dragonfly,
 Think well on what it may portend;
 In quiet night, by moons full light,
 Watch close as these steeds descend.

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bforibus commented on DRAGONFLIES

01-20-2010

this was too unique and fantastic to qualify a comment to post to it, but in the attempts to comment... i loved it

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks so very much B4!! UR a gem! Peace, Love, Light, Rose! XD

Rodcen commented on DRAGONFLIES

01-20-2010

I love Dragonflies, they are so cool looking.... Very good poem, kudos and two thumbs up

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks again Rod, lol! They are kind of magical, aren't they? Peace, Light, Love, Rose! XD

1990lh commented on DRAGONFLIES

10-11-2009

ahaha that was preetty cool i enjoyedthe read u painted a great picture in my head love great job

queenrosered

10/11/2009

Thanks so much 1990! Much appreciated! Love, Rose! :)

RettaJ commented on DRAGONFLIES

10-11-2009

wow this is so dream like...reminds me of tinkerbell and mermaids playing amongst each other.

queenrosered

10/11/2009

It actually felt like a dream too retta, maybe that explains the dreamy quality! Thanks so much! Love, Rose :)

fmrdancer commented on DRAGONFLIES

10-11-2009

A beautifully written fantasy. I love dragonflies. they are so ethereal and fairy like

queenrosered

10/11/2009

They are fantasy huh? Thanks for reminding me, lol! (wink) I sometimes straddle the two worlds, a great place to be! Thanks my friend! Rose! :)

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA