bonjour mon amie

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bonjour mon amie

even though, 'tain't even so,
that you ain't no friend of mine,
due to some unlatched hitch,
or quirk or glitch,
in the matrix of space and time,
if not for such dynamics
our course would be conclusive,
but i guess holding-on and letting-go
ain't mutually exclusive,
and so it be,
twixt you and me,
an ebb and flow so convoluted,
we aren't one-in-the-same,
or two-of-a-kind,
but otherwise well-suited.

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ginga commented on bonjour mon amie

08-22-2009

jw, Very clever and I particularly like the style of the way you inadvertently try to admit that the girl is different but still fine! Creative and entertaining. ginga

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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