BRIGHT ROOM

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    BRIGHT ROOM

    the light is so bright
    it hurts to open my eyes
    dont remember much
    just me screaming to the top of my lungs
    i try to move but it hurts
    my arms feel like they are glued to my body
    i can not move
    my mouth is so dry i can not speak
    close my eyes trying to think
    and it hits me
    the evil of the world
    took control of me
    the pressure
    could not pay my bills anymore
    barely had money to make it
    then my boss cut my hours
    how will i feed my three kids
    my so call friends tuned their backs on me
    with no where to turn to
    but insanity
    rage,hate and violence
    took over my mind and soul
    and landed me here
    in this bright room


    WRITTEN BY:TORIET

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    SILKYTWEED commented on BRIGHT ROOM

    12-09-2009

    Fantastic Write.....you got skillz sis....Write On.....ONE

    magati commented on BRIGHT ROOM

    10-16-2009

    well cant real put the words to is....it sure does send i to different direction but the message is there and the feelings too.....

    Rocetman commented on BRIGHT ROOM

    08-04-2009

    said it before, your talent is flowing like a rivers currant, please feel free to chat. love your talent!

    blackfootlady commented on BRIGHT ROOM

    06-02-2009

    Very different and very good!I like the way this poem flow towards a bright room.I think a happy sequel of a bright room would inhance what this one has pushed you towards.Good luck! keep -on writing

    Wonxxtnz commented on BRIGHT ROOM

    05-14-2009

    yeah its a nine ...i dont even want to know where the bright room is or was.i just hope its better now

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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