FAITHFUL TO THE UNFAITHFUL

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    short but i feel it says alot about most women that care about someone that do not feel the same way

    FAITHFUL TO THE UNFAITHFUL

    They are there but you just choose not to see them

     

    What can I say what do you expect me to do

     

    Write it across the sky

     

    Yell and shout it from the rooftop

     

    It is necessary do I have to go of my way

     

    Just to prove I care for you

     

    Or is it you just refuse to accept the fact

     

    Well my heart can not take it anymore

     

    Longing and weeping for you

     

    Just to say those magic words

     

    Or to feel that magic feeling

     

    I long for something that’s not there

     

    I am loving alone

     

    Faithful to the unfaithful

     

     

    WRITTEN BY:TORIE T

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    Len commented on FAITHFUL TO THE UNFAITHFUL

    03-05-2011

    This poem reminds me that two wrongs have yet to make a right, and that the heart wants what the heart wants until it breaks. Good job!!!!!!

    SILKYTWEED commented on FAITHFUL TO THE UNFAITHFUL

    07-10-2010

    I like this...a "felt" write of longing and/or enduring....well done...thanks for sharing!

    musipity31 commented on FAITHFUL TO THE UNFAITHFUL

    03-04-2010

    the flow of this is a deep expression of misunderstood emotion and having to continue on in spite of what is going on inside of us is unique in that we press never the less giving our best.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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